#27541 closed defect (fixed)

small nits for the Android blog post

Reported by: traumschule Owned by: hiro
Priority: Medium Milestone:
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Description

This is an awesome post! Just small remarks:

1)
The download link goes to the void and the page has issues (comment:14:ticket:27305). Could you link to https://www.torproject.org/projects/torbrowser.html.en#downloads-alpha?
We can change it back later with the next release.

2)

"All anyone monitoring your browsing habits can see is that you’re using Tor."

probably should be

"Anyone monitoring your browsing habits can see that you’re using Tor."

3) i'd add a sentence to RESIST FINGERPRINTING after

"Tor aims to make all users look the same, so Tor Browser for Android makes it difficult for you to be fingerprinted based on your browser and device information."

saying

At the moment Tor Browser users share OS specific fingerprints. We are working to improve this in the future.

4)

"When you use Tor Browser for Android, your traffic is relayed and encrypted three times as it passes over the Tor network."

"travels through" or "is transmitted over"?

5)

Orfox will sunsetted

"Orfox will be sunsetted"

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comment:1 in reply to:  description Changed 12 months ago by sysrqb

Thanks for these!

Replying to traumschule:

This is an awesome post! Just small remarks:

1)
The download link goes to the void and the page has issues (comment:14:ticket:27305). Could you link to https://www.torproject.org/projects/torbrowser.html.en#downloads-alpha?
We can change it back later with the next release.

Yeah, good catch. I'll correct this.

2)

"All anyone monitoring your browsing habits can see is that you’re using Tor."

probably should be

"Anyone monitoring your browsing habits can see that you’re using Tor."

3) i'd add a sentence to RESIST FINGERPRINTING after

"Tor aims to make all users look the same, so Tor Browser for Android makes it difficult for you to be fingerprinted based on your browser and device information."

saying

At the moment Tor Browser users share OS specific fingerprints. We are working to improve this in the future.

I'm guessing you're referring to #26146. Unfortunately, we'll likely continue specifying Android in the UAS. Mobile browsing is too different from desktop, and usually relies on the user agent.

4)

"When you use Tor Browser for Android, your traffic is relayed and encrypted three times as it passes over the Tor network."

"travels through" or "is transmitted over"?

5)

Orfox will sunsetted

"Orfox will be sunsetted"

Thanks!

comment:2 Changed 12 months ago by sysrqb

Resolution: fixed
Status: newclosed
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